Your chalk drawing with the audio poem describing the process gives a very present tense multi-sensory experience. I do love the sound of chalk. Nice inclusion.
Thank you :) I'm glad the effort was worth it. The process is mostly what I wanted to show, explain. I felt a poem would be the extension of the expression on the board.
A good dose of Guzman in the morning always seems to jolt my creative spirit. I love every piece you put out man. Also, great chalk work by the way.!
Thank you a bunch Mr. SPAM :)
Nicely done man! Love your ability to use different mediums and even combine them. I definitely see the Hemingway (and Cormac) influence in your work.
You keep writing poems like these and you might eventually get me into poetry one of these days…
Thanks bro, I am glad you took the time to read it :)
I've always enjoyed reading your pieces Ricardo, and my namesake Jr.
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I would love your thoughts
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Great drawing man, I love it!
Thank you, I appreciate that coming from you. Your drawings are always a hit.
I love when things like this happen. Thank you for sharing it with us
Your chalk drawing with the audio poem describing the process gives a very present tense multi-sensory experience. I do love the sound of chalk. Nice inclusion.
Lovely to hear your voice!
Thank you :) I'm glad the effort was worth it. The process is mostly what I wanted to show, explain. I felt a poem would be the extension of the expression on the board.
It definitely came through. That's what it felt like to me.
I love the context as much as the poem :)
Thank you. I like when poems stand on their own, but I didn’t want to leave out the context this time. I think it benefits from it. Appreciate you!
Just lovely.+1
my first point of the day!
Ricardo! Loved that lase stanza a bunch! Hope all is well!
Thank you I'm glad it ends strong :)